tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post7978030809481238321..comments2023-06-29T09:42:26.046-05:00Comments on Sentiments from an Enslaved Sissy: Fiction: fs01 - Some Words from the Authors (Warning: may be some mild spoilers)fur sissyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06773975470940525031noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post-14472804187745069462016-06-02T16:29:23.348-05:002016-06-02T16:29:23.348-05:00I was able to make the fixes, Lady Grey. Due to t...I was able to make the fixes, Lady Grey. Due to the inability for blog posting to work correctly via mobile browser, I run into some problems at times. <br /><br />I very much appreciate your feedback on this. I have changed it from an introduction to just some words and a warning to steer people away if they would rather experience it first.<br /><br />Take care.fur sissyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06773975470940525031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post-67996012885591887082016-06-02T09:38:11.517-05:002016-06-02T09:38:11.517-05:00Thank you for the feedback Lady Grey. I will give...Thank you for the feedback Lady Grey. I will give it a comb through later today when I have time. <br /><br />i wrote this heavily out of insecurity (no one had finished reading/commenting on all 8 parts yet). My fear was that my intentions in certain parts did not come through enough due to the limited means I chose to display their feelings and my own lack of skill as a writer. I figured the chance to give it a "nudge" might ease that along. <br /><br />I will take everything you said to heart and will be giving it some serious thought.<br /><br />Thank you again.<br /><br />fur sissyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06773975470940525031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post-41859974514941860062016-06-02T06:23:47.934-05:002016-06-02T06:23:47.934-05:00You might want to edit this, fur. It seems to hav...You might want to edit this, fur. It seems to have repeated itself in publishing it, and interspersed this with that in a mixed up order, etc. Btw, and for what it's worth, I HATE "previews of coming attractions" - never watch them - as well as dust jacket introductions that reveal too much of the plot. The part where you do a list of characters is something I'd not read myself, and you tell much too much about the characters ahead of time for my taste. The story should speak for itself without exposition before it starts. Sorry, but you were asking for opinions, and I'd much rather see your introduction AFTER I read the story, if at all. Just my own personal view, and I'm sure that others may well disagree.Lady Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10795130564028111447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post-79288573000559043372016-05-30T12:19:34.051-05:002016-05-30T12:19:34.051-05:00Writing the introduction last feels strange, but i...Writing the introduction last feels strange, but it seemed to work best now as it did with my Reflections posts. fur sissyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06773975470940525031noreply@blogger.com