tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post8132076031916656674..comments2023-06-29T09:42:26.046-05:00Comments on Sentiments from an Enslaved Sissy: Fiction: fs01 - Part 8fur sissyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06773975470940525031noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post-76005694136745358482017-07-12T13:42:45.961-05:002017-07-12T13:42:45.961-05:00Thank you, Nora. You are making me blush.Thank you, Nora. You are making me blush.fur sissyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06773975470940525031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post-6224760567523828702017-07-12T10:52:05.393-05:002017-07-12T10:52:05.393-05:00Well it was fabulous!!!Well it was fabulous!!!naughtynora00http://en.gravatar.com/naughtynora00noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post-27687774234113521362017-07-11T19:37:07.434-05:002017-07-11T19:37:07.434-05:00Thank you, Nora.
When I started writing I had no ...Thank you, Nora.<br /><br />When I started writing I had no idea how far I would take it, let alone continuing beyond the first arc. I am very happy that you enjoyed it. <br /><br />I had originally envisioned this as a comic but it was soon clear that my artistic abilities would be nowhere near sufficient so I turned to words. In a lot of the media I expose myself to I enjoy the gut-wrenching endings but I wanted what I created to feel a bit better than that. <br /><br />Take care.fur sissyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06773975470940525031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post-65148847833294892672017-07-11T16:53:56.921-05:002017-07-11T16:53:56.921-05:00I love that this story has a happy ending...the cl...I love that this story has a happy ending...the classic femdom story of slave meets love of his life, creepy disturbed female sub sells slave out of jealousy, Mistress rescues slave and they live happily ever after. That was supposed to be funny, and absolutely in no way a critique. I truly enjoyed this series, furcissy. You are an incredible writer. Thank you for keeping me on the edge of my chair, ripping my heart out, making me cry real tears, and now making me beam with happiness by the end...you are talented, my friend!naughtynora00http://en.gravatar.com/naughtynora00noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post-68214056127201046372016-08-25T01:52:16.317-05:002016-08-25T01:52:16.317-05:00Thank you, Misty. That means a lot to me.Thank you, Misty. That means a lot to me.fur sissyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06773975470940525031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post-30569721539635892892016-08-24T21:33:59.696-05:002016-08-24T21:33:59.696-05:00My heart just melted.
My heart just melted. <br /><br /><br /><br /><br />Mistyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07931554793023459482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post-88057728920646632012016-06-01T10:45:50.214-05:002016-06-01T10:45:50.214-05:00Thank you, Miss Lily. The "circle of warmth&...Thank you, Miss Lily. The "circle of warmth" was my intention once I had figured out a direction. One thing I've noticed in my own experiences is that the more deeply a sub gets pressed into subspace over extended periods, the easier it is for him to cope. A very basic example is being beaten "unfairly." If the nature of "fair" D/s is being beaten reasonably for a punishment, a sub deeply immersed will be able to justify the "unfair" punishment in other ways: it brings her pleasure, it reinforces her dominance, it reinforces the lesson, I deserve it anyways, etc. <br /><br />One of the large factors I had in mind while writing was shifting that level of subspace depending upon the situations. The deeper the subspace, the simpler the desires. When he's at a "human" level, there is the desire for contact, time together, displays of love, promises, etc. as a source of happiness. When he's pushed to a "slave" level, the other desires are still present, but minimized in comparison to the simpler desires to please her, see her smile, and so on. These too provide him with happiness and his brain can "justify" anything else that is missing. <br /><br />When I wrote Dominique into Part 3, I made notes of the events that would happen from Parts 3 through 8 (plus a yet to be written bonus chapter). The idea was that everything except Part 7 was by design and planned by Cassandra as a way to explore new dynamics for the relationship: to see how deep his subspace could go and to see how his role/status changes would mesh with her Domspace. <br /><br />In the end, he doesn't blame her for any of it, and the entire process deepens his love. While she does blame herself for Part 7, it too deepens her love for him. I felt Part 7 was necessary to facilitate the ending. If they had been together for 4 years and it was as serious as it was, there had to be a reason that she had never chosen to marry him (e.g. not believing in marriage, not wanting to get married, etc.). Parts 7-8 provided the catalyst to melt that final barrier Cassandra had held. It may have seemed extreme, but hard times often lead to us thinking about things in ways we had never considered before.<br /><br />I hope this makes sense. <br /><br />Take care.fur sissyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06773975470940525031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3097573368575371682.post-18003263906239447992016-06-01T08:13:23.424-05:002016-06-01T08:13:23.424-05:00It is nice to see chapter 8 end very similiar to t...It is nice to see chapter 8 end very similiar to the way chapter 1 began.<br />Both scenes showing the devoted sub willing to sign contracts with a Domme who loves him. I also notice that fs01 feels happiest both in the beginning and the end. I do see a relation to his happiness and where Misstress spends her time and attention. <br /><br />I can't help but agree with an earlier comment made by Lady Grey pointing out a continuing theme of "Be careful what you ask for". I feel that this theme applies to both fs and Mistress. As fs spends more time with Kimmy (whom is hated by me, and maybe fs also) his fantasies seem to give him less pleasure. Mistress experiences multiple backfires resulting in suffering for fs. By allowing fs to live his fantasies she gave up the very control that once kept him safe. Hopefully the loving Mistress Cassandra will learn to say no and keep her precious unicorn safe. <br /><br />Miss Lilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05516012472453053586noreply@blogger.com